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Empty In Side
by gothicserenity
written on March 25, 2004 4:24 PM
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I'm empty inside
alone, don't cry
the dark wont kill
it also wont fill
all my holes
caused by many blows
the scares wont fade
then ones i made
and the ones you helpt
you didn't no that I felt
the emptyness
caused by the mess
of loves and friends
when will the pain end
the pain u made
when will I be lade
to rest
no one ever tryed there best
to fill my holes
or stop the blows
that they broght on
has it ever dawned
in your head
that mabe you said
something to me
you think this can't be
that YOU gave ME the pain
it's driving me insane
but now u no
why i always feel low
I hope you'll try
to stop me from crying
and give me somthing back
so I wont lack
my soul
then mabe I wont go
or say good-bye
then mabe I wont die



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