Back in the day all of the kids were brutal/ All of his efforts proved to be futile/ Degrading, and putting him down everyday/ If he hadn't done something he wouldn't be here today/ Often he found himself believing what they were saying/ Every single day he looked forward to his life ending/ If it weren't for his parents he'd likely be gone/ For that he loves them more than anyone/ Because of them he gained the confidence to beat it/ Because of them he's never going to quit/ Every single remark was countered with a comeback/ He now had something to block their every attack/ Nobody can make him unhappy now/ Who wants to be unhappy anyhow/
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Wexican (amanda): GREAT POEM!!! i love it good
job on November 27, 2004 9:39 PM
: thts such a GREAT attitude!
great poem! i congratulate u!
if only more ppl felt the way
u do!
--candylips123-- on March 22, 2004 8:20 PM
