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|missymusic: Ohhhh who's in love ;) (you!! )|
on June 02, 2012 10:07 PM
|zippy1357: "opposites attract and he's definitely attractive" this is actually one of the few poems on this site that doesn't suck. this is really really really good, and that is coming from someone that HATES non rhyming poetry. the third to last verse is a little weaker than the others, a little wordy, but otherwise this is excellent. it has a very personal and lyrical feeling to it and some of the plays you do with words are very clever, keep doing that in the future. this is really great, i'd be proud. |
on May 05, 2012 4:53 AM
|~IndianPrincess~: i din understand it fully..
but it sounds so sweet..|
on April 27, 2012 6:10 PM
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