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Slain Lovely
by OurDaysofGrace
written on November 03, 2009 7:23 PM
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Blood pools around me
Is it mine or yours?
'Cuz we're both lying
Here on the floor
And I can't remember
How we got here or
How it came to this

I can feel cracks
In the walls of my memory
Where I thought
Was once the serene harmony
That we had together
As we breathed
But maybe I'm mistaken

And our bloodshot eyes
And our bloodshot skin
Is all I am able to take in
Of our present predicament
Besides the smoking gun
Next to us both

Trying to recall
Who shot who
Or how we ended up like two
Insane lovers, none of it
Makes sense in my
Clouded little head
Cold on this concrete bed

I feel no guilt
But I feel no fear
So I'm wondering
Why we're both here
Dying together
I don't remember fighting
With you since forever

I guess none of it
Matters now
Look at you one last time
Before I close my eyes
I still love you
Even if I killed you
Even if you killed me
Even though we killed one another

I don't know the answer
I don't care what it is
Now our spirits mingle
Blood pools around us
Is it mine or yours?
'Cuz we're both dying on the floor



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