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The Odyssey
by Melancholic_Maggie
written on November 15, 2009 9:33 PM
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Etched on the branches, of a hemlock tree
Scribbled syllables syndicated with intensity
“Follow your passion incessantly”

A deferred dream; in slumber awakened
Despair momentarily extinguished-
In the resonance of the dead of night

The wind sends chimes and trails
Scented aroma of long lost hopes avails,
Mahogany sawdust infiltrates

The blunt dullness of blind senses,
Labyrinth of confusion, lack of definite choices!
Adjourned odyssey suspended.





28 August 09



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Kitsukami: An excellently written poem. I like your style. :3
on November 05, 2009 2:00 PM
suffer_in_silence: really like this, great opening (i might steal that lol) and i like the phrase 'labyrinth of confusion' <3
on November 04, 2009 10:58 AM
Mertina: my favorite line is "a deferred dream; in slumber awakened." <3 this poem! :)
on November 02, 2009 7:58 PM


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