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BAD DAY
by Toaorp
written on September 13, 2003 1:39 PM
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Pounding, burning, searing pain
Forever losing what I’ve gained

History paper’s already late
I’d like to set a curse on fate

It seems I messed up big somewhere
Hit someone, forgot to share?

No idea what I did wrong
Yet I'm still moving through the loser throng

My face that’s burned, begins to peel
I should’ve worked with the devil for a better
deal

Dogs all around start to growl at me
And I just got stung by a fat ass bee

I’ve only jogged one lap so far
But I’m dead tired, headed towards my car

The tires are slashed
And the window is bashed

The radios missing, I can’t find my keys
Fell down earlier and scraped my knees

I just don’t think this is my day
I think I’ll just skip the fancy play

Head to bed early and get some sleep
Maybe eat some shit since I’m in it so deep

Tomorrow should be a much better day
So you better watch out, I’ve got a lot to say


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Silented_Cries: Hey that was a good poem. I kinda know where ur coming from. I have ha some bad days that i never thought would end.. Tag me if u wanna chat! Peace!
on October 19, 2004 4:37 PM
heather: i love this part Maybe eat some **** since I’m in it so deep! really good poem!
on July 29, 2004 2:01 AM


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