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First poem in 3 years
by zippy1357
written on April 01, 2009 6:01 AM
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And the light goes dim
As do your eyes,
The spark of our fire
Flickers and dies

It's tearing apart
It's tearing away
And it's tearing my heart
And we begin to decay

We slowly slip to the ocean
Feel the motion of fate,
By the time we are swimming
It's already too late

We drifted together
Across a sea of love
Now we stray from each other
No stars for guidance above

Like two lost ships
Blowing horns in the fog,
I know you're there
But i'm too water logged

How can we be here?
How can we stand?
On a deck with no ship,
With neither wind nor land?



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RangerTed6: love that man got me thinking and very descriptive!
on December 14, 2009 4:55 PM
jfrost11: Wow... Powerful imagery and diction! It may have been 3 years since your last poem, but that is hard to tell. You have an amazing talent continue to write : )
on April 01, 2009 7:19 AM


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