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Fountain of youth
by Melancholic_Maggie
written on September 23, 2008 7:11 PM
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take a dip into my everlasting fountain of youth,
And u will remain forever young,
turn back the aging clocks
from time, hidden and concealed,
my secret ingredient has been kept discreet,
i yearn to share it with someone,
the key to me i offer u,
immortality i promise u,
and my word i shall give,
for my promise i always keep,
deep wrinkles of ur weary soul
is ready for exfoliation now,
enhance ur vigorous lively soul
with a fresh youthful one
ur child at heart will be reflected on the mirror
for everyone to see,
a projection of what u have ever dreamed to be,
this is the answer to all of ur prayers,now taste the glee,
this process of transformation intakes no suffering nor pain,
instant beauty will be of ur claim,
no need for hesitation now,
just follow ur intuition and,
let it guide u towards ur most cherished dream,
for a beam of glistening light through u shall be seen,
now take a dip into my everlasting fountain of youth.



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winterfalls: This is amazing, it was really flowing, i liked how you repeated the first line at the end, that was really smart. all in all this is my favorite one of your poems, and maybe more puctuation but still good. :)
on July 25, 2008 2:26 PM
Mertina: OMG. i wrote a poem like this called 'youth' but i never put it up on this site. it didnt exactly have the same concept as this one though.
on July 24, 2008 8:43 PM
suffer_in_silence: weird but a rly intersting idea, i like it <3
on July 24, 2008 6:58 PM


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