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|winterfalls: This is amazing, it was really flowing, i liked how you repeated the first line at the end, that was really smart. all in all this is my favorite one of your poems, and maybe more puctuation but still good. :) |
on July 25, 2008 2:26 PM
|Mertina: OMG. i wrote a poem like this called 'youth' but i never put it up on this site. it didnt exactly have the same concept as this one though. |
on July 24, 2008 8:43 PM
|suffer_in_silence: weird but a rly intersting idea, i like it <3|
on July 24, 2008 6:58 PM
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