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Thing$ in Lif3(feedback plz/)
by itsnay
written on May 29, 2009 12:37 PM
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It's crazy how the outcome of things can be
Well my motto is fuck the stress i'm free
Walk and talk with the great attitude
fuck being angry mad upset and rude
Know what my focus is willful credentials
Money real money and living presidentials
Tired of feeling tired
When i know it;s more
Like galore the things that people live for
Save up hide it and put it away
Fuck the play
Time to grow up
Fuck my life being tore up
I'm keeping it together
I'm trying to live forever
Life isn't ending
I believe it's just beginning
I remember i had a dream
I was the soldier plus i had a team
so i'm satisfied
Not to be controlled because i have the power
I was just a seed and i bloomed into a flower
I know you are hurt and the taste in your mouth is sour
Tried to ruin me
But you improved me
Sometimes in the long run you would of fooled me!!





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YoungProphet: Hmm... it almost sounds like a break up(relationship) in the beginning and the end. The middle sounds almost like a rebirth or the dawn of a new point of view. Maybe maturity? I like it, it reminds me of me in a lot of ways.
on April 10, 2009 8:29 PM
ravns_heart: omg!!! love it it is so awsome girl! you should totally rap lol.
on September 25, 2008 10:59 PM


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