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by fender12
written on June 19, 2008 11:27 AM
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a car

a crash

a comma

it all came so fast
like a wave of emotion crashing down on me
do i rejoyce for your soul
or sob for the o so fast departure
no time for goodbyes

your face coverd in cuts and bruses
but so serene for i knew you were already in his arms

(we miss you uncle chicken RIP)

*i kno it sucks but tell me wat you think*



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stressedoutlilkid: this is really good and sorry for your lost hope the person rests in peace
on June 19, 2008 1:22 PM


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