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My Personal Hell
by DeepMeaning
written on June 21, 2007 9:12 PM
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I don't exist,
Not anymore,
My mind has gone,
And shut it's door,
My life is over,
My sanity snapped,
I haven't a coherent,
Thought left.

I wish to die,
Leave me alone,
I want to be here,
By myself,
Don't pry,
Don't try,
To get me out,
Of my twisted mind.

I'm alive,
On the inside,
The outside,
Is just a shell,
There is nothing,
To talk to,
Or see,
Unless your inside,
My personal hell,
Where nothing makes sense,
And everything's wrong,
Where no one is good,
And I fight with myself,
Where you see the real me,
Instead of my shell,
It's all inside,
My personal hell.

I am no longer,
Inside my body,
I am in my mind,
Don't try to talk to me,
I won't hear you,
I'm fighting deep inside myself,
I needed space,
I needed time,
I needed someone to care,
But no one listened,
And so I ran,
Inside my twisted mind.

On the inside I am alive,
But on the outside I am dead,
You can cut my wrists,
But I won't feel it,
For I feel nothing,
Outside my hell,
I feel all the pain inside my mind,
I feel the suffering.

I am a prisoner,
To my own mind,
I cannot control what it does,
It tortures me,
From day to day,
And it won't ever be done,
So people,
On the outside,
Who haven't gotten caught,
In my mind,
Kill me,
End my suffering now,
I'll thank you with,
My very last breath,
Just kill me,
So I can escape,
My personal hell.


COMMENTS FROM ME, THE AUTHOR OF THIS PEOM:
This is a very insane piece. I am out of my mind and I was when I wrote this. It shows how gone I really am. I can't even concentrate on writing this.



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DeepPrincess: This is an absolutely amazing poem. I'm sorry you feel/felt thisway. You really let me understand the emotions. They flood all over the page. It's great. I hope things are or will get better for you soon.
on June 21, 2007 11:48 PM


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