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In the Dark
by abyssmetalhead
written on August 09, 2003 5:37 PM
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I can't think anymore, not for the good of me
I can't breathe anymore, I don't give a sh*t
about that
No one believes in me anymore, not even me
It's a shot in the dark, but hey,
Do you think I'll be okay?

I'm tired of putting on my fake face of
satisfaction
Putting up with the insults, the damage that's
been done
It's already bad enough to be hated by own self
It's a shot in the dark, but hey,
Do you think I'll be okay?

I wonder if this is my last day being alive and
well
Why not give someone else a change who wants a
life?
I think things will be just fine, either way I'm
done for
It's a shot in the dark, but hey,
Do you think I'll be okay?

I know these words come as a shock from my mouth
But I'm saying what I'm feeling inside for once
Don't you think it's crazy how this works?
It's a shot in the dark, but hey,
Do you think you're actually going to miss me the
next day?



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miserypainlove: i know you wrote this a while ago, but this is exactly how i feel, and felt. i couldnt have wrote it better myself
on March 05, 2005 3:19 PM


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