will you be my shoulder
to cry on in times of need?
will you be my band aid
to heal me when i bleed?
will you be my oxygen
when i run out of breath?
will you be my life-support
when all i think about is death?
will you be my smile
to lift me up when i feel sad?
will you be my sunshine?
when your the only light i have?
will you be my heart
to love me when i'm down?
will you be my laughter
so my face'll never frown?
will you be my girl
never to be replaced?
will you marry me
and share with me god's grace?
i wrote this when i was 15 originally and ever since i have changed it over the years as i've matured and grown and until i marry her it'll get more beautiful as the days pass by
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Angel2Devil2Friend: I love this poem. I believe everyone deserves a person like you describe. on January 18, 2008 8:01 PM
joybell: This is a great poem! I'm sure that whenever you marry your wife, she will love this poem!!!! on August 08, 2007 3:58 PM
vaboy3201: This is pretty good! You should write poems more like this. Well done! Now about the comment above...poet or not, your pretty good! Whatever goes on in your personal life, go on and do it lol. Back to the point...palin and simple...good job! lol. ^_^ on January 23, 2007 3:02 PM
niket: I must admit.. when I saw your username i said to myself "there is another so called "poet" who is just a guy dying to get into a girls pants and willing to prove that he's sensetive no matter what." I was pleasantly surprised this is a really really god poem, rock on on January 17, 2007 2:06 PM
