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Lost at Sea....
by SINGLEstud5988
written on December 21, 2006 9:16 PM
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mistreated and abused

raped and even broken

i was tossed like a toothpick
by the violent waves of society's

perfect storm'

no direction left to go
except together within the flow
of biological mistruths and wrong thinking
unable to stop their absorption
just

a living
dying

assisted suicide

slowly
floating,
-------------drowning

within the depths
-of the tears from my memory

as they rise up against me
foaming at the mouth

totally surrounded by the waters of revenge
from the womb of
unforgotten pains

as i cling to life
with the desperation
of a freshly
----------------shipwrecked
-----------------------------sailor....
watching as slowly and surely
pictures of my family drift further and further away

my tears they all betray me
joining sides with the enemy

sharpening my thirst
as in one army they
over and beyond all boundaries

saturate me

from the shallowness of my looks

to the very depths of my soul
awakening me to the truth
of the countless lives
they've thus far

devoured

graves
like a million
----------------white dominoes
marching
one

after
another........|.|.|.|.|

forcing me into reality
as i s
--------i
-----------n
--------------k down to my knees

---y
o.u.r
---c
---r
---o
---s
---s

-----s
----t
---a
--o
-l
f

to the


s-----u----r-----f----a----c----e

of my

life

beginning to set me F----r---3--3!


as the truth of my existence

--------s
------e
----s
--i
r

-into FOCUS

a Light is finally seen

without You


in m y


L-I-F-E

i'm just an unsalvaged

soul

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-------o-------e----------e----------
-----------r---------------------r-



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at

--e-----s-------a--------e
s----a------e--------s-------a



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Actress_Star: its so sad but good.
on January 11, 2007 12:05 PM
Mltch: this is a great poem, it got a bit difficult to read near the end though. the writing is brilliant, great job on it.
on December 21, 2006 9:08 PM


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