ilbks: its so true...
on September 16, 2006 1:02 PM |
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Bobcob2011: I LOVED it...its awsome..Nice job
on August 01, 2006 8:48 PM |
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bholmes: Aint that the truth!!! This is really good!
on July 27, 2006 10:11 AM |
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sweeet5: thats great and true it works when you stand up to them even once they will back down. I like this alot!!!!
on July 24, 2006 12:05 PM |
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Balla3babe: man, tru dat
on July 24, 2006 9:06 AM |
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Angeldevilfriend: I love this poem. I like how you are sooo truthful in your poems.
on July 24, 2006 1:33 AM |
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Angeldevilfriend: I love this poem. I like how you are sooo truthful in your poems.
on July 24, 2006 12:13 AM |
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Righteous_Vigilante: Wonderful excellence. You're one of the few rhyming poets here that really appeal to me. "Nobody will come around to fix things like a mechanic". Great matter-of-fact statement!
on July 22, 2006 9:49 PM |
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x_LadyVampyra_x: very realistic and mature..and i know what its like to be bullied around ..i used to be called a psychotic vampire goth chick lol,give u a 10.kestrel.
on July 22, 2006 7:13 PM |
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crash_into_u: hey that was awsome, youve got talent cuz u really made me think, please dont stop writing!
on July 22, 2006 6:53 PM |
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babygirl004: hey i think your poems is good and i think you sghould keep wirting i love how it ryhmes veryy good and you speak the truth about bullies keep writing..... very good
on July 22, 2006 5:58 PM |
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