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If Only They Knew (feedback please)
by always_reppin_08
written on July 24, 2006 12:07 PM
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If only they knew everything that was going on
About the hurt, pain, and all the other sad songs
How I wonder why nobody cares to ask
Why I have to continually wear a mask
A mask to cover up and hide my true self
Because i want to be the only one who knows and no one else
So i cant say how i feel or let them know that i am scared
Becasue if they did find out, what if no one cared???
So I have to pull myself together and do what i have to do
But I still say to myself "If Only They Knew!!!!"





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Balla3babe: the mask the masl the mask, we all have that part of us inside, i love your poem
on July 22, 2006 4:54 PM
bholmes: This is a great poem! I know what its like to feel like you have to pretend. It is the worse feeling in the world. Keep writing poetry. you are GREAT at it!
on July 22, 2006 2:18 PM


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