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Pool Party Pervert
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on July 19, 2006 11:08 PM
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“Poy-oh, Poy-oh, Poy-oh en tazón”
Garbanzo beans dribbling right off the greens
The Italian spittle drooling around
In circles and circles like a Cinnabon treat
Reflection quivers in chlorine sweat
Ridges surrounding your St. Lucia locks
Smooches
Peace
Sundress’s charm
Making me stay for an hour longer

Timmy—a fool, wily, rotund
Slips and slides hard on grainy
Ugliness
Impact looks great, cheek’s a good plum
Last time I recall, a raspberry
On it comes, mothering feet
A first aid kit like a 60s lunchbox
Maybe I should HELP?
A spy tossed in grudge
Those nice sturdy arms, twigs of a snowman
Fighting to live in a fistful July
Yes, they’re yours
Tears against your neck
And a band-aid under his eye
There, relaxing by the “mesa”
Reminds me of umbrellas in a Martini Sea
His heaven, in a plate she’s prepared just for him
How uncanny, to envy a 5-year-old

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*"Poy-oh, Poy-oh, Poy-oh en tazón” - Chicken, Chicken Chicken in bowl.

*Oh, yes. It's actually spelled POLLO. POLLO=Chicken.

*"Mesa" - means table, in Spanish.

*I realize this may seem abstract. If you're having trouble interpreting it, perhaps the title will help.




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amateur_for_now: Very confusing. Its hard to see the point you're trying to get across.
on December 22, 2007 7:12 PM
MaDgEnIuS: I don't understand what's so confusing about it. :/ It's about some five-year who sustained an injury, repaired by his mother, and then it ended with him receiving the delightful treat of foods listed at top(The accident in question is el timme.). Are at least that's my vague interpretation; Some metaphors seem to have little relevance, sure, but that's possibly because of unshared associations with certain abstractions.
on July 21, 2006 6:43 PM
QhBaRrElChIc: It's not my favorite of your poetry, but nonetheless it's charming and very witty. At least to me it is. This is a poem where you either get it or you don't... I'm not sure if I fully understand it but I can appreciate what you must have gone through to write it and the passion you have put into it I can see and read... I think you did an excellant job! I mean how many people can write about this and make it sound so sophisticated and smart?
on July 20, 2006 7:34 PM
h0tkisses4you: i agree with the person above. idk if you spelt chicken in spanish so that people knew how to pronounce it or if its a type o but its actually spelled pollo
on July 19, 2006 10:08 PM
Dreamflower: A bit confusing. I like the idea of leaving things a bit abstract, but it's still a bit hard to understand.
on July 19, 2006 6:06 PM


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