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Vessel of All Things Good, Shattered When No One Saw
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on July 19, 2006 2:46 PM
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You, an empty pit
So thin
Fragrance hollow, lashes damp
Out here in a clearing where
The crows scream ill, wings bled dry
Hands without a mitten’s care
Sobbing as the clouds draw near
Veins—these brackets good to scar
A lily within her space
Lachrymose tune, a pulse lost within
A smooth paper blouse with tulip’s bile
Comatose Virtue, thrown without grace
And where was I to save it?



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MaDgEnIuS: Interesting poem. I'm wondering what you're alluding to in the last two lines.
on July 21, 2006 6:36 PM
Miles2go505: I think your poem shows how depressed and lonely everyone feels and a somber hollowness of something deep deep within. You have a lot of talent!
on July 21, 2006 5:39 PM
QhBaRrElChIc: "Out here in a clearing where the crows scream ill, wings bled dry, Hands without a mitten's care, sobbing as the clouds draw near." That's my favorite lines...Very beautiful! I could feel the heart ache, sorrow, and everything else! It was very well written, Good job!
on July 20, 2006 7:25 PM


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