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Prickled With Youth
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on July 15, 2006 2:14 PM
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Her complexion ruddy against his lemon
Painted with coral red nail polish
Seeping into a freckle or two, so deep
That acetone will not work
Down, down, down we go
Amid the grass so bitter with spite
Turned dead when Mama boils it through
And licks it, spilled on fish
Itchy, peeling, my tickled delight
Decides for once that the sun’s no harm
When a bluebonnet’s resting on my clavicle
And it’s the purr of your nose I hear



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QhBaRrElChIc: Amazing!....Don't know what else to say other than I have no doubt you will be one of the great poets of the century...If you aren't than you should be!
on July 17, 2006 1:14 PM
EyesWideOpen: [Thank you for your kind words on my poem.] This work makes me tingle. And very few things do that. Excellent.
on July 15, 2006 2:40 PM


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