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Heather's Greasy Disgust
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on July 15, 2006 3:00 PM
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The gals at McDonald’s are talking again
‘Bout shoplifters, kleptos, thieving to live
Tsking, smirking at such the life
Exalting the rite of McGriddling

In a love boat of plastic, the geezer sits
Checkin’ out babes no older than five
Asks them if they’d like to once meet a Pirate
But they’re told Mr. Depp’s too old

And I finger the bread of my No. 7 combo
Tuning out tantrums, milk meeting death
And flick these bands against my arm
Shaved and sore from Verano’s blow
I see how simple they all seem
Corpulent mountains without a thought
For the penalties ahead if they keep this up
Gluttons who need the Three Strikes Law
Once, with your milkshakes
Twice, come the fries
And after 600 calories marches the Mac
There you have it, beloved thrice
But once again, I have to remember, that everything is
So much BIGGER IN TEXAS
More nonchalant, less sushi-skinny
Life in a hammock without the sweat
If only, if only, they could melt from my fire
But again, this isn’t C-A

And suddenly, clouds get settled
Chicken gets chunky and I want to retch
Passing away by the light of Ron’s smile
And McDee gals will never shut up



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QhBaRrElChIc: Wow! I don't know really what to say but this is something I can relate to or have witnessed before. It's amazing again how you made an everyday thing into something so much more! Great job!
on July 16, 2006 10:15 PM
punk4ever: Wow, that's one of the most creative poems I've read in a long time. Awesome.
on July 15, 2006 11:08 PM
EyesWideOpen: A shot of sarcasm mixed into a pot of wit and intelligence. ; )
on July 15, 2006 3:04 PM


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