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Strange Blue Eyeshadow, Shimmering Morning
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on July 14, 2006 11:35 AM
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As I pull off the cap, reminded of the sky
I know there’ll be a mess on my crinkled palm
So drilling the glitter through the whole of my hand
Fingers now chafed, hangnails cursing
With a Mexican trill… “Date Prisa!”
Well, I get down to business
Over those smears and through the lids
Splendid ice, “mis ojos brillan”
Over and over, layers and layers
Just born on this skin, tumbleweed thin
Dappled and wrinkled much more with each stroke
Each jab, each creamy mudslide shining
Stretching those corners, Chinese eyes
Shut down for a second, testing the feel
Of kung fu glamour, foil in the mirror
Admitting it looks quite weird




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QhBaRrElChIc: Very very awesome! I love your word usage and how you made something a lot of people use into something enchanting and mysteryous! Your really an amazing writer!
on July 16, 2006 10:11 PM
punk4ever: Haha, nice. Again, very creative.
on July 15, 2006 11:10 PM
Shadow_X: You like makeup so much you rigth a poem about it? Still this poem gave off a meaning so good one.
on July 15, 2006 11:18 AM
Cute_Flirt_69: lol this was so cute...i love the discription and how it is describing a simple thing like puttin on make up into this materpeice with really beautiful words i want u to kno i really love this style u've used for this poem keep up the AWESOME work!! 10/10 Sammi
on July 14, 2006 7:44 PM


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