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13 Ways to look at a girl
by amac2009
written on January 24, 2007 4:32 PM
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13 Ways to Look at a Girl

One. Perfume and hairspray
Tickling noses
The smell of innocence is lost.

Two. Merciless felines always prowling
Waiting for their prey.

Three. With broken hearts
The world slowly changes
And today its colors are bluer.

Four. Giggling voices
Fill the empty spaces
Light heartedness makes life worth living.

Five. Confusion fills the opposite sex
Becoming mysterious and captivating.

Six. Indulging in shadiness
Temptation overpowering minds.

Seven. Quickening hearts
Butterflies flutter inside.

Eight. Guided by instincts
Moving along
Following hearts they survive.

Nine. Soft gentle whispers
Tingling souls
Shared secrets in the night.

Ten. Cuddled up so tightly
Being held close
Delicate in their ways.

Eleven. Curlers and straighteners
Never the feeling of satisfaction.

Twelve. Imperfection is haunting
With broken self esteem.

Thirteen. Longing for your approval
Blind to their own natural beauty.



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ashlieraquel: good
on January 24, 2007 4:40 PM
poeticprincess777: This poem was amzing....especially the last part. TEN STARZ
on August 03, 2006 8:22 PM
XxJuSt_PeAcHyxX: This poem is very True. Great Job. Keep Writing
on August 03, 2006 1:24 PM
Darkchild713: aww........
on August 03, 2006 12:05 PM
GirlNLove08: great
on August 03, 2006 12:00 PM
lizzy08: omg. this is a good poem. very true. <3
on August 03, 2006 11:55 AM
crzy4him: this is totally awesome and true!!! this is the way every girl should be looked at
on July 27, 2006 2:11 PM
Righteous_Vigilante: Lovely. Splendid. Sincere. See, I love your style of writing and how you flow so well. Your words are pleasant to the tongue, and the imagery just makes my heart flutter. Good job!
on July 14, 2006 11:25 AM
MissMustang07: THiS POEM iS GREAT!! i lOVE iT!
on July 13, 2006 9:20 PM
heppner214: This is SO awesome!
on July 13, 2006 8:28 PM


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