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Because of you
by AndIKnewItAllAlongLuvDino
written on November 18, 2007 10:13 AM
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Tonight i did my last dance
and took my last breath
and its all because of you
My last prom and my last kiss
my first fear that i would never wish.........again
Thanks to you the stars fade tonight
But when they were visible they never shone so bright
so beautiful were they that graced my eyes vision
But no longer will i see them and that wasn't my
decision.............but yours
My neck enclosed in your hands
it's seems that your lust for sex has been my timeless end
And now i lay here all tatttered and torn
Inside and outside you thrusted your sword...........
into me, killing me slowly but surely as if you never would stop!
You broke my heart,
You made me cry!
your the reason why i never got to say my last goodbyes!
I HATE YOU!
tonight i did my last dance
and took my last breath
Had my last prom
and had my last kiss
Saw my last stars
and made my last wish.................
and it was all because of you.






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laurel13: wow u r really good
on July 19, 2007 12:31 PM
whatever0569: wow that deep
on September 08, 2006 5:18 PM
MonALisARozE: This was an amazing poem i really enjoy reading your poems!!
on June 09, 2006 10:04 PM
SaraRhiannon: This is a really stong poem. You make a strong statement with it too. Really nice job.. - Sara : )
on June 03, 2006 1:12 AM
Rock_N_Roll_Chick: OMG! Wow. Awesome poem. I can so relate to that, really well. I can admit it's harsh, but I can so see why.
on May 27, 2006 3:35 PM
BrOkEnHeArTeD273: wow wow wow i could really relate to that about a week ago so well its not even funny .... i mean that was what i've been trying to right about and you made it come out perfectly good poem i really like it
on May 27, 2006 3:24 PM
iamurs_4eva: omg!! wow!!!
on May 27, 2006 8:34 AM


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