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Bleeding Heart
by Actress_Star
written on April 29, 2006 6:59 PM
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As she falls into the water
The heart starts to bleed
It was no longer put together
It no longer had a need

The heart used to live
But now it wanted to leave
It had nothing more to give
It had nothing to decieve

She felt the pressure, heavy
Pushing through her mind
It tried to move steady
But theres nothing it could find

She woke up from the dream
The dream that felt so real
So real she felt a scream
The scream of pain that wouldn't heal

She felt like she was drowning
Cold, and bleeding
Her screaming heart was pounding
Pounding and no longer needing



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Angeldevilfriend: This poem is heart renching. Keep writing.
on July 23, 2006 5:37 AM
unlovedloser: this is awesome! keep writing and never lose your talent! btw if this is true hang in there!
on April 29, 2006 7:09 PM
katers6689: i really like keep writing!!
on April 29, 2006 7:05 PM


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