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Distant Dispair (please comment !!!! pleaseeee)
by INuTeRO
written on May 11, 2006 7:30 PM
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Staring down a green light,
My doubt does cover me
Sometimes i wonder if she does love me
As tears stream down this face
I wish i could show them but my mind wont budge

All my happy thoughts of summer times
I am an honest man
All my happy thoughts of a new life
Are they going down the drain?
Too late to think i already ran away...

Iv hit a red light
Is this a dead end of a cliff i have to jump?
The thought of my death she probably doesnt care
This thought leaves me to dust
As i wish my soul had power to forget
But i cannot erase

All my excitement
But she doesnt even believe me anymore
All my new lifes
Are they going down the drain?
Too late to stop i am always running away...

This i cant decide
I wish i was in control
But i shake my head to say
Everythings just fucking great
But this is the end i cannot meet
These events are my defeat

But shes the only thing that matters
How can i live without her?
Thats right i cant
All i can do is bleed and pant
But probably as she reads this she doesnt give a fuck
Maybe i should just roll over on the dirt..
I dont even fucking know anymore....



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ho0k3d_on_ph0nix: aww :-/ i love you bruno.
on April 30, 2006 11:33 PM
ho0k3d_on_ph0nix: aww :-/ i love you bruno.
on April 30, 2006 11:29 PM
saer: hey its good, full of feeling, if u ever need to talk emil me kiwi_the_frog@hotmail.com
on April 28, 2006 9:57 PM


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