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by toyacnote
written on July 20, 2007 8:59 PM
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In the eyes of the wisest soul, an uncertain future will unfold, and the story that has been fortold becomes fiction.
I see it everyday some cry and some smile, but at the end of that long mile lies uncertainty.
When one leave without a trace another comes to take his place, and the expression upon my face lies still as I wait.
Wait for the tides that binde to knock me off my feet, everynight I loose sleep as tears caress my cheek.
Yet my heart steady beats like the beat of a drum as my feet begin to run down the aisle of success.
My mind is now clear, and I'm wise beyond my years; I bestow upon my peers the life lessons I've learned here.
So what do I see when the sky and the Sun meet, as I glance upon the streets...
I see oppertunity!



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glorifythetruth: eh..ok. its ok.
on March 10, 2006 12:01 PM
morepowerthanyou: Wow. This is really great. It has a positive message and flows very smoothly. How long have you been writing?
on March 09, 2006 6:14 PM


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