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churning tears of pain
by Aven_Daridy
written on December 18, 2005 1:49 AM
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Tears of joy
Now churn to tears of pain
Holding a troublesme grin
That I can not maintain

Holding troubling ideas
You cant resist
From that shiny blade
That meets my wrist

Gushing away
The blood, hurt, and sorrow
For the faithful hope
Of a better tomorrow

With one after another
Blockading the alternate pain
Puttin the tears to a halt
For my midnight train

To take me from this place
Take me a long distance
To not feel pain
In this uncertain existence...



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YoungGoddess410: thats a deep poem..i hope u dont be cuttin ur self tho...
on December 18, 2005 1:20 PM
hEaRt_bRoKen_11_28: i know what this feels like i do all the time and i have to hide it or else my mom would send me to a psychward. i just wanted to say whatever it is that is makign u do this it will eventually get better. but don't do anything to stupid. Please don't i haev been there done that and still am doing that. JUST PLEASE BE CAREFUL if this poem is about you.
on December 18, 2005 9:36 AM


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