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I will love you if you give me feedback
by Paper_doll
written on November 03, 2005 11:34 PM
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Forgotten
Lost
Shatered
Wishing to find a place to stay
Torn between living or dying
MAking a reqest
That u may not see another day
She puts it nicly
She just says
I hope you choke

Forgoten in the cofussen
Putting aside her strenght
To live one more day
She lost the war
And lost her life
because she was
Lost shaterd and broken



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JaimeLyn420: great job I have two poems that are very similar check them out if you'd like one of them is called Lies
on November 04, 2005 9:32 AM


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