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Second Times are Better
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on October 02, 2005 12:48 AM
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I'd love to wear a polka-dotted dress
Dabbed upon by your celebration's spill
Could you stand to clean it up?
No, you couldn't but I'm glad, for I couldn't walk this way
Mademoiselle on a bipolar line
Could you tell me what you think of my good?
Amnesty, she's not so wonderful
When you're the few flailing into her flood

Breathe my pleas down like they're your favorite
Gift ever given to you
They're the cream that makes the slush
The best to blend awry
Read a book about Seconal
27 or more could save you through
From the daughter, the Parter, the night in the shed
It's over in these three days

I'm believed for shame's the vein
Running to my soles
The foot on the left is aching too hard
So I test it out for breakage
I wonder why he's watching me
Married in his Sunday's best
Far from where I'm sitting now
With Opera Trill, my friend

Put you eyes upon my bruise
Wrap me in a little red tapestry
I'm left with my boy from the five year blow
Who wants to call you "Dad"
You don't have to, but if you must,
It'd make you look so nice
So if you stop your wallows in her puddle
I guess I could stay for more



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QhBaRrElChIc: I really really love the line "Breathe my pleas down like they're your favorite gift ever given to you." It's very emotional and there's a lot of frustration and pain in it. At least that's what it seems like to me...Very VERY good! Your an amazing writer!
on July 17, 2006 1:28 PM
Im_So_Obsessed: this is amazing!!! I love the line "Mademoiselle on a bipolar line" . this is so good!
on July 09, 2006 9:57 PM
tehgaff08: This kind of different is a good one. again the emotion... i like it
on October 15, 2005 12:51 PM
Jessee2003: This poem is interesting, I never seen one like this before. I like it, cuz it is different. Good job!
on October 10, 2005 6:46 PM


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