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Induced Into Lucifer
by Righteous_Vigilante
written on September 29, 2005 11:03 PM
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Induced into Lucifer
Written by Kristine Brown on July 12th, 2004

What could have happened, never came to be
Only to be known
As an infantile chimera...

With sobs hiding faster, never to expire
Love in baby bullets resides within the floor
Pity's for the girl who wanted it back,
And she's ill; nowhere at ease

Bettie Lynn in wrong, miracles defiled
Never were in favor of the kid inside the box
Yeah, he's poor; what were you actually thinking?
Just to let you know, he sings to you at night

Prima Donna of the sauna, can't you see he's shattered?
All he needs is a dark-breeze hug
Only once a month
Bitch in jeans of Ass and Fitch
Drink that filtered water
I hope you know what's coming
His weeping wound so dry

Pensive without reason; nothing much to life
He wonders how they see this way
Pretty dolls of scandal
Speaking to his blade, he needs his dream to last
To pause and indulge
In an envied wife's collapse



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lonelypoet: good job, i like it
on July 22, 2006 12:36 PM
QhBaRrElChIc: Very powerful and I agree with dragonflygirl all your poems should be published! The whole world should be able to read your fine artistry! There really are very few like you who can with words take everyday things or events and turn them into fine art! Again fantastic job!
on July 17, 2006 1:32 PM
tehgaff08: pretty good, i can feel the emotion. keep it up
on October 15, 2005 12:42 PM
Jessee2003: I like this poem 2! It's neat. Keep up the good work.
on October 10, 2005 6:49 PM
dragonfly_girl: i absolutely LOVE "bitch in jeans of ass and fitch" dripping with satire.... love it hon! keep it up!! have you had any of your stuff published??? it should be.
on September 30, 2005 12:00 AM


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