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Suicidal Romance....
by singlestud5988
written on January 25, 2007 11:09 AM
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the tears erode my heart
as the colorodo carved a canyon
my life it fell apart
when you died myself my faith abandoned

as the river ran it's course
with my life and heart eroding
my health was getting worse
as i cut with blades corroding

now the river ran of blood
cause the tears just weren't enough
to cleanse my past of mud
what i need is just your love

but we a world apart
can no longer seek communion
be through speech or occult art
our hearts won't reach reunion

my knowledge of the cure
though impossible to attain
feeds in me a fear
of living a life without the pain

by now the paim's complete
a necessity a need
no more feelings to deplete
just a continuance to bleed

though a pain can't mask a pain
i strive to prove this wrong
still the blood brings not a change
but the end to this sad song



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poetic_angel61893: i love it...omg its the best poem i have ever read..u just made my hole day, try reading some of my poems sometime if u have a chance, but this poem is beautiful ur and awesome writer keep up the good work man!
on January 25, 2007 2:49 PM
weak_and_powerless13: ****ing awesome once again, loved it i feel your pain man, i've been to counselors b-4 for cutting and ****, and just don/t get to carried away. Find someother way to occupy yourself. Take care kenzi
on December 15, 2005 10:06 PM
VAMPIRECLAUDIA: Awww...that is really sad, it makes me want to cry....it's well written, brillantly written but it's words are filled with so much pain.
on September 20, 2005 5:50 PM
tays033: :'( thats so beautiful and sad... u have such talent and an incredible way to express yourself.. cherish that
on August 26, 2005 2:56 PM
velvetdarkness: crap i meant to rate you a 10! but yes anyways..the poem. It was very sad, but most beautiful. It wasn't like every other depressiong cutting poem where the poets rhyme dove with love, and all the jazz. Your poem flowed perfectly and the rhyming was barely noticable since each pair of rhymes are rather..smarter then "love....dove" lol (which is a good thing since it makes the poem flow more and it seems the rhymes weren't forced) well anyways...another great poem by the one and only stud! lol hope to read more! ~dana
on August 26, 2005 2:22 PM
_maddie_: aww thats really pritty in a depressing kind of way
on August 26, 2005 1:57 PM


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