why is it that i always feel like no one likes me?
is it because my dad left me for his girlfriends and new family?
is it because my mom yells at me all the time?
i dont know why....
the only people that i can really count on are my friends
they are the only people who really understand me
do people not like me because i block everything out
and only let my closet friends in?
is it because i dont try to make new friends so people think im socially retarded?
i really dont know............
do you know????
wow this really sux major balls....but yea plz leave feed back....i dont care if u tell me it sux...i know it does
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nmyownreality: writing is about expressing your feelings that is why i am going to compliment u on this it is tru that ive criticized some other ppls poetry for not being what i expect poetry to be but yours is different it isnt so shallow and i understand what u are saying we all feel insignificant and dont think bcuz your poem doesnt ryhme it isnt good many of the most renowned poems ever written were freeverse and ps this doesnt suck in fact this one of the only poems on here that i havent left negative feedback for if i ever leave negative fb for one of ur poems im terribly sry im just being honest and this is a msg for everyone plz dont tag my guestbook negatively if i criticize u im just being honest on August 15, 2005 9:51 PM
emo_tears90: it doesnt suck katie...writing poetry isnt about rhyming or whatever..its about letting ur feelings out..my poems dont rhyme and i dont care...write some more!!!i'll leave feedback on all of them...and its better to have a few close friends that u can count on instead of tons of so called friends that stab u in the back every chance they get!!!! on August 15, 2005 8:42 PM