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My Shell
by xSweetStuffx
written on July 27, 2005 8:21 AM
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The tears in my eyes
The burning inside
But I wave and I smile
And I hold on to my pride

The heartache, the longing
The dreadfulness I hold
Is kept locked away inside me
And my story’s never told

My heart bears the scars
Of the people I miss
For each passing day
I long for a kiss

My head is filled
With the cries that I guard
And nobody knows
That my life is hard

Not every day though
I admit that is true
It’s only when I’m down and lonely
And I sit there feeling blue

It is my secret
One that I will not tell
And I will keep locked away
Alone in my shell



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ghettobootygal13: wow gurl that rocked...im gllad u still have it
on July 27, 2005 12:06 PM
peewee33: good job i like it how every other line ryhms good job!!
on July 27, 2005 10:37 AM
N_O_T: Break out. This is a very nice write, it delves into a part of yourself that not alot of people are use to looking at. Good job on this one.
on July 27, 2005 8:26 AM


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