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|never4gotten90: really cool but how does she have a protruding stomach if she's starving?|
on March 10, 2005 4:43 PM
|morenalizz: that us the best that i have read all day|
on March 10, 2005 4:21 PM
|cls14: Bob Geldof would be proud of you. Nice work.|
on March 10, 2005 4:00 PM
|scilla120485: that's real deep, you have an amazing power in you, keep it up|
on March 08, 2005 10:35 PM
|A_Lie_For_A_Tragedy: So true. Very descriptive and i like it even though it usualy bothers me when poeple get too discriptive but i think it was necessary for this poem. Nice Work|
on March 08, 2005 7:13 PM
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