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Tear Stained Pillow(fb plz)
by michelle_petterson
written on April 10, 2008 3:48 PM
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I find myself in a recalling dream
where people die and people scream
In a darkened meadow where we met
in the sun's shadow with no regrets
A crazy story missing you
an interal battle you miss me too
Tossing and turning in sleepless nights
dreams haunted with screaming fights
Waking up with a tear stained pillow
staring at autumn the sleeping willow
Life in a bottle my hands on the glass
Key to my soul where monsters mass
On my face a twisted smile
In your direction there's no denial
Numbing the pain with your edge
no deeper sorrow my love will pledge
I find myself where tear drops poor
from your blade forever more






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JoePz: grt poem, read mine, most are like yours, you will love mine -- Joe P -- all of mine are written about the truth, about sh*t i have been through or feelings i have felt or things i have done to myself...so read with caution, some of them can be kind of disturbing...
on March 24, 2005 12:22 AM
BrOkeN_HeArTeD_4EvEr: thats good !
on March 23, 2005 11:40 PM
hottie_ashley_: i luved it good job
on March 23, 2005 11:11 PM
pinkpanther128: That was a great poem..i really liked it..Keep it up and dont stop writting!
on March 23, 2005 11:10 PM
MyCatEatsCheerleaders: that was really good... but u mite wanna change ur user name cuz weirdos cud track who u are and that would be bad...not to try to scare u im just saying... : ) ok i feel scary, im only 13 i wont hurt u , o wow i sound like such a raper, ok im gunna go now
on January 22, 2005 1:56 PM
blinded_by_tears: very nicly done i love it
on January 18, 2005 11:12 PM
sarahgrace24: nice job i realyl liked it
on January 18, 2005 9:29 PM
ChErRySnCrEaM854: I feel that way most of the time.. it sucks but you write really good...
on January 17, 2005 10:19 PM


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