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Brutal love
by singlestud5988
written on August 13, 2006 4:57 PM
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as i hold you in my arms
my problems melt away
i think of you in love's sweet arms
from me a step away

the joy you bring to my heart
is like nothing ever before
i'll die if hearts we were to part
but i'd love you forever more

and think of you in beautiful ways

you are the one to who i gave my fragile heart

never again will i hide in the shadow

i'll always remember the love we shared in that dark autumn night

the consequences really don't matter, i'll love you after death

i'm sorry love is brutal
but we all know it's ways
i think of you thoughtfully
on all of the seven days




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Dogfan: that is a heart felt poem...and yes love can be very brutal indeed.
on March 08, 2007 1:10 PM
VAMPIRECLAUDIA: Very well written reall, great, and sad, it's nice to know that it is possible for sopmeone to love another forever.
on May 12, 2005 10:18 AM
VAMPIRECLAUDIA: Very well written reall, great, and sad, it's nice to know that it is possible for sopmeone to love another forever.
on May 12, 2005 10:18 AM


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