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Stay Strong - FEEDBACK NEEDED
by Moses_Malone95
written on November 11, 2004 9:47 PM
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These days everybody is trying to get me to crack.
Sending me to an institution, never to come back.
But they're never going to get me that easily.
They can't be able to effect my mentality negatively.
Nobody's innocent in this game, everyone's to blame.
As long as there's people it'll always be the same.
To me that's just the true nature of mankind.
Not everybody on this planet is always kind.
When they see a difference they're often brutal.
Never taking them seriously is necessary for survival.
There's never any truth to what they say.
Their words won't effect me up to my dying day.
I always knew that everything said was wrong.
The only thing I can do is continue to stay strong.



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streakergirl4712: wow this is good too!! u r a very strong talented writer keep it up!!
on January 13, 2005 7:47 PM
MoonPoet88: Wow! This poem is juss wut I needed 2 hear, I'm going through a problem and it's hard 4 me 2 stay strong but w/this poem in mind i'll rethink.
on January 06, 2005 4:13 PM
Evil_Dragon_Girl55: Hey i like this poem. It encourages the ppl that r having troubles to not give up and to fight life strong. so from one troubled person to another...stay strong! keep up with the good work!
on January 06, 2005 3:39 PM
spoiledsportsangel2007: good really good hope you stay strong
on January 05, 2005 12:21 AM
: as you said, stay strong. i really think u can and will make it to the end to whatever it is you are dealing with. the fact that you can openly write about it, and with such result... Continue what you've been doing. Stay strong. `cheers
on November 12, 2004 4:54 AM
lexus: I love this poem and I think that you are very strong. You will make it.
on November 11, 2004 11:56 PM
*hiddenbeauty*: i think this is a realli kool poem, i lov the rhyme scheme, i realli wish that i culd write like u! keep it up;)
on November 11, 2004 9:59 PM


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