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SwEeTeStSiN87: that was good..you should have flowed with it a little more though...i'm not criticizing you or anything...it just starts the abruptly stops...but it was a really a good poem either way! keep the work up!
~JeNzY~ on February 26, 2005 2:23 AM |  |
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