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This How I Start My Ryhme
by themissingredcrayon
written on January 10, 2009 12:15 PM
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Finding words I could not speak
Gaining strength, no longer weak

No more screaming, just a sound
I once was lost, and now I'm found

Healing wounds, yet causing scars
No more cuts or crashing cars

The lies are gone, the truth is out
This is living, without a doubt

Witnessing birth and losing friends
Walk the straights and run the bends

Souring higher, fighting fire
Laughing louder, smiling wider

Cut the fakeness, this is real
Stop pretending how you feel

Calm the winds and raging storms
Get the pen and sign the forms

Turn around and take a look
Write a paper, read a book

Spin around, just one more time
This is how I end my rhyme



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Vicky5621: I love this! It's totally amazing! The rhyme is amazing. plz keep writing. U have a talent for it.
on January 10, 2009 5:11 PM
XxdeadXinsidexX: that's really really good! great job! I really like it I would love to be able to rhyme like you! I kinda suck at rhyming T_T but anyways great job and keep up the good work ^_^
on August 04, 2008 10:35 PM
blackout101: OK I GUESS????
on April 02, 2008 7:58 PM
joshaukins: pretty good rhyme scheme.....nice...
on February 20, 2008 4:05 AM
4t33ngurl: I loved this poem a lot and I;m sure that you hear that people can relate to this poem, or one of your other ones if you write more. I do. But seriously...I can! You got great talent!!
on February 19, 2008 11:14 PM


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